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Tulips Dance Take 2

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    Wow! That's beautiful Raiven. The angle of view is much better on this one and the colours are nice and bold. The DOF is perfect. The shine on some of the petals is a little too bright. Do you have a polarizing lens? Or maybe there is a way to burn down the glare without making the area muddy.

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    Lovely Raiven...I really like the title too.
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    I like this too although EJC has a great eye for those highlights. I don't have a polarizing filter yet but can't wait to get one!
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    This is a very lovely lover, it also goes with the title, well done.

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    Thanks guys! I probably should have put a diffuser on the flash. I put this in Topaz Adjust which brought up the high lights even more but I like the overall texture created. This is how it it looked before Topaz Adjust.
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    Yeah, that second one looks much better. A keeper.
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    Ok the last for the Tulips Dance series. Thanks for your patience and comments.


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    That's a great and sharp shot. I only can't decide, if I like the purple background....?

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    That second shot is great, raiven! Great comp!
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