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    I am interested in thoughts and preferences for these images for a topic "Vibrant". Particularly the composition. Does the centred composition work, like the bottom 2? Or is this one better, which I fixed in GIMP by adding some negative space in GIMP.


    This one was under lit.


    I know this one is blown out, but I sort of like it, although it really defeats the purpose of this image which is for vibrant colour.


    Feel free to suggest a mix of these as I have a lot of variants, or can re-setup.

    Thanks in advance.

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    I like this idea (I also like allsorts!) but in all three the focus is not sharp enough-particularly the stem of the glass. I might play with diff't angles here as well.

    however, I am by no stretch of the imagination am I an expert.

    of all 3 I like the colors of the first one

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    The first one does stand out as "vibrant colour" when compared to the others so I like that exposure the best. This is one instance when your border is very distracting. If you are going to create any kind of a border on a photo with a very dark or black background I suggest that you go with a full white border and not just a stripe.

    Also, I prefer the balanced space around the subject and this is definitely one where centre composition is more appropriate. And last, I would raise the camera up and try a shot down at about 20 or 30 degrees above the rim of the glass so you can still see the stem of the glass but it's on a kind of downward angle.
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    Thanks Bambi and IG
    Quote Originally Posted by Bambi View Post
    but in all three the focus is not sharp enough-particularly the stem of the glass.
    I noticed that too, but I think this is just the nature of the glass/reflections, as I know the other elements in the same focal plane are spot on focus wise, and I was using manual focus on a tripod and timer shutter release. Even shots with a larger aperture are like this.

    Quote Originally Posted by Iguanasan View Post
    The first one does stand out as "vibrant colour" when compared to the others so I like that exposure the best.
    This makes sense as I was following all the rules on this one.

    Quote Originally Posted by Iguanasan View Post
    This is one instance when your border is very distracting. If you are going to create any kind of a border on a photo with a very dark or black background I suggest that you go with a full white border and not just a stripe.
    Agree. The border is part of my export settings fo posting here.

    Quote Originally Posted by Iguanasan View Post
    And last, I would raise the camera up and try a shot down at about 20 or 30 degrees above the rim of the glass so you can still see the stem of the glass but it's on a kind of downward angle.
    Doh, I was so busy messing around with lighting I only did 2 different comps. Partly because I had an expensive camera/lens on a tripod and one of my wifes fine glasses sitting on a stool, and a 2 year old running around.

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    I managed to do a quick re shoot this afternoon. Better?


    Also after listening to Marko's podcast on finding subjects, I go this idea while I had the gear setup.

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    Bang on! That's exactly what I was thinking and I think it looks great!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Iguanasan View Post
    Bang on! That's exactly what I was thinking and I think it looks great!
    Thanks IG.

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