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First critique post.

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    Default First critique post.

    I am not completely happy with the exposure but not sure what I should have done to make it better. It was very late afternoon/early evening with a fairly low sun, and there was a haze over the water from a fog bank starting to come in off shore.

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    Exposure looks fine to me. There might be a slight reddish cast but it's not bothering me that much. Shot could use a slight contrast boost imo.
    Main problem though, the eye. It should be sharper.
    Hope that helps

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    ^^^What that guy said. I very much like the comp though
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    this is a lovely photo. It's too late now but either a diff't halter or no halter altogether would make for a better portrait. the halter is old and worn and takes away from the beauty of the horse.

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