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    Interesting idea! I rather like it, except for the blown highlights on the background wall, UR.

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    Thanks for taking time to comment. I really went for a high contrast..Looks like I went too far!!!! I can bring them back easily.
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    I don't mind it. I would personnally would like to see a bit more of her face.
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    Excuse my ignorance on this one but what is it she is doing; it's not obvious to me.

    I'd like to see the environment more clearly defined (especially the arched thing at the top) given that this is an environmental portrait. Hope that helps. Marko
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    Thanks for taking time to comments. I appreciate the feed back
    The model is in the middle of an art exhibit call juxtaposition and she is just touching the wire to add a little interest.
    The wires go to the ceiling so I wanted to keep the image of the model on the larger size.
    In retrospect, Marko made a good suggestion. It might have added more interest to see exactly where the wires go.
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