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This is a discussion on Cracked within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Thought I'd throw an old picture up since I'm not taking any these days. Taken with the macro feature. I ...

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    Thought I'd throw an old picture up since I'm not taking any these days. Taken with the macro feature. I liked this when I first took it, but I'm not so sure now.....Any feedback/thoughts appreciated.
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    Not sure about this one Gem. I do like the texture here but overall I'm not really sure what you were trying to achieve. I think there's too much dirt in the foreground and the dirt for me isn't that interesting. The shapes are the interesting part here and the dirt detracts from that.
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    Quote Originally Posted by marko View Post
    Not sure about this one Gem. I do like the texture here but overall I'm not really sure what you were trying to achieve. I think there's too much dirt in the foreground and the dirt for me isn't that interesting. The shapes are the interesting part here and the dirt detracts from that.
    Yeah, I'm not exactly sure what I was doing, either. I guess I found the cracks interesting? Lol, I don't really remember. This was taken waaay back in November when I started, which might explain a few things (lol) ... Thanks for the feedback.
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