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    My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.

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    Interesting; I like the subject matter and the composition, but I find the extreme shadows a bit harsh.

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    Thank you
    I'll take the contrast down a notch.
    I appreciate the feedback.
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    I like it. I think the harsh shadows are a vital element in this photo.

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    HMMMMmm I have not had time to redit but maybe it is just a little on the dark side?
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    If you were trying to take a photo that showed the shadows and the roof pattern that created them, then in my opinion the exposure is perfect.
    There is possibly more that could be down with the composition but without seeing more of that scene it's hard to suggest.

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    Thanks for the comments. I really want to show the floor in the scene. This placed was JAMMED pack with people. In my opinion,people add interest but too many people will take away interest.*LOL*
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