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This is a discussion on Contrails within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I'm wondering if this has any value as a semi-decent shot or not,...I thought it was interesting and had a ...

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    I'm wondering if this has any value as a semi-decent shot or not,...I thought it was interesting and had a bit of a story to it but I'm not sure whether it has any value as an actual photograph... my first reaction is "not really" but I thought I would post it regardless.
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    It's an okay shot for me; I think it's missing more impact and i'm not crazy about the crop through the trees. Maybe if more land was showing and the sky was darker? just a suggestion.

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    As a photo it just not working, just no real centre of interest.. Nice sky, it may mean something to you but as a viewer just to vacant of a look.
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    That's kinda what I figured...hey maybe I am learning something here afterall!
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    With more of the mountain and forest in view I would absolutely love this shot!
    Don't be dis-heartened. I rate this as an 'almost there' image.

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