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This morning view from my office

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    Here is the view from my office window this morning. Untouched out of the camera (apart from the frame).

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    Also, what if anything would you do in pp to improve this?
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    Pretty cool for straight out of the camera. I like the colours. I assume that is mist that is giving it quite a hazy look? With this kind of picture, my personal preference would be to darken things up a bit, by reducing brightness. I would increase the blacks and reduce the brightness even more in the foreground, even to the extend of losing detail. Then maybe increase the saturation.

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    There is so much that you could do to a shot like this but frankly, I really like it the way it is; I'm not sure I'd do anything at all.
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    I'm with Antz ... the bottom of frame begs for some darkening. Either curves treatment to darken all the blacks or perhaps just a burn along the bottom.

    Cool shot.

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    I like it as is but agree with Antz. A little darkening wouldn't be too bad.
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    Thanks for the comments everyone. Marko, I liked it "out of the box" as well. I thought it might be a good one for me to play with as I'm trying to learn and develop my PP: Thanks AntZ and everyone else for the comments.

    Have a look at this one. I adjusted the levels, brought the left up (don't you love my technical terms) and lowered the right side. I also adjust the curves into a slight "S". I looked at raising the saturation a little but decided not to as I thought the extra dynamic range had brought up the colours sufficiently.

    Better? Worse? Although I liked the first one, I think I like this one better. More comments/suggestions?
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    I like the level of blackness now.

    I'd possibly try to burn in that ridge of cloud that runs across the frame a bit.

    And maybe even backing the saturation off just a little.

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