here's another go at it...
This is a discussion on ...and some freesia within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; here's another go at it......
here's another go at it...
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I really like the colors and the diagonal composition.
Nice vibrant looking photo with those colurs there Casil!
I think you almost got the comspition just right. But not quite. I think pushing the main flower slightly off centre to the left of frame so that that the background flower wasn't cropped off would have been a bit better. Also would have included just a little more at the bottom of the frame too.
Those adjustments would have created a full diagonal of interest from the the bottom left corner through to the top right corner.
But as is it's nice and the colour combination is certainly almost luminescent.
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