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This is a discussion on Trampoline within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Haven't posted here for a long time now, it's just been too cold to take pictures without freezing my fingers ...

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    Default Trampoline

    Haven't posted here for a long time now, it's just been too cold to take pictures without freezing my fingers of. Got this one while playing on a trampoline with a friend and I thought it turned out pretty cool.

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    Well captured. I think perhaps though a crop to a landscape perspective vice portrait might be in order; the excess sky at the top doesn't really add much. As well, you could make it a very interesting image by cropping out the bit of trampoline at the bottom and making people ask, "How the ????"

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    I like it, not sure I would change anything.
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    i like it too! i might crop a tad off the top, but i like it as is! well done..

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    Yeh good job.

    It feels bit like the horizon is crooked but perhaps that how it was.

    You could maybe burn in some of the lighter areas of cloud for more dramatization.

    Small things though, it's good as it is.

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    Nice shot, well done. I like the amount of sky at the top as it give the photo a sense of flight and fun.

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    I like this shot as well - very fun. I might like to see both subjects a bit larger in the frame though, just a bit.
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