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This is a discussion on Autumn in Muskoka within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Thank you so much for your detailed reply. It's appreciated. I did take a number of shots ( though admittedly, ...

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Zenbohemian Autumn in Muskoka 10-14-2014, 01:11 PM
Runmonty Not a critique as such, more... 10-19-2014, 09:53 PM
Zenbohemian Thank you so much for your... 10-25-2014, 12:08 AM
Marko Rm asks good questions and I... 10-25-2014, 10:31 AM
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    Thank you so much for your detailed reply. It's appreciated.

    I did take a number of shots ( though admittedly, I didn't play with depth of field -- I'll try that next time); my favourite was a landscape oriented photo that doesn't include the log. It's just that I thought this would be the strongest photo and was struggling to figure out why it wasn't in the hopes that I could improve on my composition next time.

    I think you're right: the log isn't enough of a feature to make this image as strong as I wanted, nor to justify the vertical composition. There's just not enough going on in the foreground.

    Thanks again -- it's really helpful to bounce ideas off of people.

    Now I'm looking forward to next year when I can return and try shooting it again. Here's hoping the light will cooperate again!

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    Rm asks good questions and I agree - what is the shot about?
    For me it's an okay shot, I'm not keen on this composition - The colors and reflections are good but then you added the large diagonal log in the immediate foreground that does not connect or flow with the background.. I don't find that it helps the composition at all (for me it actually disrupts the flow) so I would have excluded it.
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    Yep, definitely helpful. Thank you both.

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