Any Suggestions?

[kat]

Maybe it is just me, but it doesn't seem like the girl is in focus on the first shot. Maybe that is because of the ISO but I still dont' think she's in focus.

I really don't mind the second shot.

I've just started playing around with my camera as well. It can be really fustrating when you come home and your shots aren't what you saw when you where taking them. But with the help of reading and asking it'll come (or so I help ).

Yet another thread I can say..listen to Mad Aussie, I think he's on to something.

Can't wait to see some more!

[Marko]

Excellent critiques here
Kat echoes my main concern about shot 1. It's out of focus. So even though there are noise issues, for me the main issue is that it's soft, so for me it becomes a souvenitr shot.

The second shot is pretty good and I love the colours. There are many distracting elements though(radio, window, even the adult) that could be better controlled. I would go back and take these shots again and play with different angles. LOADS of opportunity for great shots in this setting. Just need practice.
Hope that helps
Marko