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This is a discussion on Which version within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; There were several pictures that I really liked, but it was hard to pick a version and whether or not ...

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    There were several pictures that I really liked, but it was hard to pick a version and whether or not it worked. Let me know which ones you think work best. Thanks again everyone.
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    this is the critique thread for a reason
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    Tough call in post 1. That amount of brick really assaults the eye so I'm leaning towards the coloured version which seems to break up the 'busy-ness' of the shot.

    Only the first one in post 2 appeals to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    Tough call in post 1. That amount of brick really assaults the eye so I'm leaning towards the coloured version which seems to break up the 'busy-ness' of the shot.

    Only the first one in post 2 appeals to me.

    Word for word what MA said.

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    Thats what I was looking for. Thanks.
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    I agree - post 1 is the strongest and the colour shot beats the b/w...but to my eye, not by much.
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