I think be careful kat. Remember ... photography is subjective and your friend likes what she saw ... she may not be so impressed with the changes. It's what she likes, not what you or we like in this case.
Maybe give her two choices.
Having said that I like the dark cloud but agree it needs a tad of dodging ... but not as much as Michael did becasue he scared it right away and the photo lost some dramatism in my opinion.
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