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This is a discussion on The old doll within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Thanks, I am happy with this one, I can see the improvements. Couldn't brush her hair, so I patted down ...

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    Thanks, I am happy with this one, I can see the improvements. Couldn't brush her hair, so I patted down as much as I could.

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    These are both nicely executed photos. My only complain would be that the subject blends in to much with the background. The tones and colors are too similar and the subject doesn't "pop and sing." Maybe a different color background would help this.

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    much better angle! the hair is much improved & i like the entire candle included in the composition... i do, however, like the lighting on her face better in the 1st shot. 2 very nice shots!

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    Hi Everyone,

    Finally found a few mins to load these new attempts. Added some new elements into the photos.
    Not sure I like the one with the clouds as the shadows are a bit hard on her face I think.
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