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Approaching storm

This is a discussion on Approaching storm within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I tried a bit of dodging about the boats and played with the curves a little. Subtle change on the ...

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    I tried a bit of dodging about the boats and played with the curves a little. Subtle change on the smaller uploaded shot. It's a bit more noticable on full size image.

    Thanks for peoples comments. I'll keep practicing with my PP.
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    And definitely an improvement in my opinion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by marko View Post
    I like this shot - what a great sky and ominous mood!

    Did you try any other variations on the composition? It might have been nice to fous on just one boat. Still, I really like this one.
    Marko, here's one of the shots that just focused on one boat. I'm not sure what to do with the sky. That's exactly what it looked like as the storm got close. A mass of grey!

    I've also got one with no boats I'll post shortly.
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    This on I wanted to get some trees as 'framing', but something about it just does not work for me. I've cropped it a little, but not too much yet as I wanted to get some feedback first.

    Thanks again for taking the time and effort.
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    That last shot is a good shot Greg. I like the composition there!

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