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    Wonderful texture in these Crashcat
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    The texture is good here, I agree.

    But imo, the texture alone is not enough to carry these images.
    Shot 1 has distractions for me and shot 2 needs other elements to strengthen its story.
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    The texture is what first popped out to me.

    I do have to agree with Marko's comment on there being no story, but good news is now I have an idea...

    So thank you both for your comments.

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    Cool pot/subject indeed.

    I like the first one as is ... but do agree it could be a stronger image as per Marko's comment. Had you stepped just a little to your left and turned a bit to your right you could have eliminated those colour distractions I think.

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