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    I think this is a very good photo in that it left me asking questions... i wanted to know more...

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    Yeah, I really like this photo. Good incorporation of your surroundings. Really a good concept and shot. Good job.
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    I look at this and I think of how this stay at home mom feels trapped when doing laundry day in and day out...I get that sense from this photo. Like she wants to go out but can't.

    I can get a story out of this..I like it!


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    Hi - Great shot, i thought she was looking in a mirror for a while Great composition keep up the good work.
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    Thanks for all of the replies and comments
    This was a concept shoot and was done in a local laundromat. Brandy is the model who is a studying hairstylist and make up artist. A canon 430 flash was placed in a dryer on a gorilla tripod. I softened the light a bit by attaching white material on the inside of the dryer with magnets. The flash was set on manual at 1/4 power and was fired with the cybersynchs.
    Finally I asked the model to looked scared. I think I got a concerned look *LOL*

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    Stunning shot, although I might have cloned the scratches from the glass and darkened the heel of the palm ever so slightly. The light on her neck and face is fantastic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    The light on her neck and face is fantastic.
    I think the shot is cool, but I find the shadows on the face to unorganised(blotchy) and distracting.
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    I love it! To make it even better though I would have to agree with Travis. I think if her face was closer to the dryer opening and her other hand was up then it wouldn't have cast those shadows on her face.

    That being said, pat yourself on the back, that's a nice shot. I assume you have some more from that shoot?

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    There are shadows there, no doubt about that. But taken in context of the location (i.e. not a studio) they don’t kill the image. One light flash can produce strong shadows and some like that. But you’re right, they can be controlled. A modeling lamp thrown in the dryer along with the flash could have helped to show where the shadows would fall.
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