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This is a discussion on Late Night Laundry within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; youp - cool shot! i like how the dryer matches her makeup... looks almost underwater-like (could be a fun photoshop!). ...

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    youp - cool shot! i like how the dryer matches her makeup... looks almost underwater-like (could be a fun photoshop!). i agree the shadow on her chin (i think created by her thumb/hand) is a distraction, but still a fun photo, good comp & interesting subject.

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    I love the shadows and lighting in this. If I did anything different I'd just want it darker around the edge of the frame, especially at the bottom. Not so much that it blacks out the swimsuit though. Just my preference.
    I have a perference for strong lighting and shadows when they are meant to be so the light on the hand and the light and shadows on her face just work for me totally.

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    This is a really good shot and at this point we are just trying to bring it to an "11"

    Stunning shot, although I might have cloned the scratches from the glass and darkened the heel of the palm ever so slightly. The light on her neck and face is fantastic.
    I agree - The nicks/scratches between her hand and her head are distractions for me, much more so than the scratches below her hand. and yup The palm is a bit too bright. The shadow on the model's right cheek caused by the flash on her thumb is also a bit of a distraction. You may want to try to fix that.
    All that said - still a very strong image!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Barefoot View Post
    Stunning shot, although I might have cloned the scratches from the glass and darkened the heel of the palm ever so slightly. The light on her neck and face is fantastic.

    Great suggestion. I was actually thinking about burning in the palms a bit today and it could use a little cloning from the scratches.

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    Quote Originally Posted by marko View Post
    This is a really good shot and at this point we are just trying to bring it to an "11"



    I agree - The nicks/scratches between her hand and her head are distractions for me, much more so than the scratches below her hand. and yup The palm is a bit too bright. The shadow on the model's right cheek caused by the flash on her thumb is also a bit of a distraction. You may want to try to fix that.
    All that said - still a very strong image!
    Thank you Marko !!!

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