Right now I don't have too much time for photography, and I'm trying to find something. I'm carrying my camera with me almost all the time.
Ok, here is one of my latest attempts:
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Right now I don't have too much time for photography, and I'm trying to find something. I'm carrying my camera with me almost all the time.
Ok, here is one of my latest attempts:
Nice mood and hues in this one ! Good job, the only thing I would do is
crop the sky in half horizontally so you get a 1/3 comp insted of a 50/50.
The 1/3 comp with give the photo a more artistic look to it. Everythnig else
looks great, color, exposure, contrast etc.
Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
"When I slow my walk, open my eyes and listen,
nature reveals her hidden beauty to me." Dwayne Oakes
http://dwayne-oakes.artistwebsites.com/
Agree with D.O - sky crop needed. I might also lighten the highlights on the water a bit.
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Wow, I can't believe it. I thought it's a crap.
I like that tone too, that's why I post it here, but that's just the only thing.
Ok, I croped the sky, now is 1/3 of the picture, but this is the maximum of highlights I can add.
Thank you guys, you saved my day
Good crop - I MAY have left another 1/4 inch of sky.
Huh?
You could easily 'dodge' those highlights some more should you choose to.
A down and dirty way in PSHOP is choose white - choose paintbrush (soft) choose soft light from the blending menu and an opacity of around 4%. Then just paint in the areas.
Hope that helps
Marko
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