Ok ok ..so a bit more work on the image, I think I have got it to where it should be acceptable
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Ok ok ..so a bit more work on the image, I think I have got it to where it should be acceptable
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Looks better than before.
I agree!
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I kind of like both images for different reasons. I hate choosing one over another. The first image of a pretty red head is a great exposure with excellent sharpness. Eye contact is perfect. Some cleaning up is needed of a few make up flecks and something around her mouth. Nothing a bit of cloning won't fix. I have a red head daughter so this plays a part in my reaction to the photo. The second shot of the veteran has an immediate emotional impact partly, I suppose, because of the time of year, and the way we think about our veterans. This is also a good exposure that you have tweaked, but I kind of like the second poppy on the soldier in the background, as it lends depth to the image. The fellow himself is so focused and thoughtful, I can't help but wonder what he is thinking.
What I like about both images is your risk taking in photographing them "in the wild", taking portraits without studio lighting, on the fly. Nice job.
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The brass buttons on the soldier in the background are still distracting and need toning down. Lower than the subjects as a minimum. And on a completely different leaning,,,,I'm not a fan of colour toning but reducing the saturation on everything to a point where the face barely has colour, except for the poppy and the medals which stay where they are, produced an interesting result I liked.
Last edited by Andrew; 11-17-2012 at 09:38 AM.
Thanks Michael
Thanks Andrew. Yes, there are always partially distracting things in any photograph, and yes, one can tome it down incredibly. However, I think i am opting to let them stand as they are ... otherwise I would have to take the other face out as well ... and that would no longer show the actual scene.
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