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    I’ll have to step into this arena with something other than an opinion of someone else's work sooner of later. Might as well be now, so fire away.
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    This is a cool shot but i don't really see how the left side contributes to the image. I would crop out the pole and the whole left side. I think the fabrics can stand on their own and have good tones in them.
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    I don't know, I kinda like it. It's dramatic with the beam of light emitting from the left. If the pole was cut out, so would the beam of light.

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    I like the shot, I would saturate the colours slightly and the bare floor on the left is we bit distracting. Overall though a good photo,
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