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A quiet spot

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    What do you think of this one?

    1/80s, f2, ISO 200 (taken with a 35mm f2 lens)

    updated it just now to get rid of a greenish tint...
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    An interesting mood here, I like it. My main comment would be that half the photo looks pure black to me so why not crop away that half of the photo?
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    I like it, but I feel it would have more impact is the lamp was specifically illuminating a definite subject...

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    I agree with Ben ... nice photo but needs cropping in a bit more or taking with a longer (more zoomed in) focal length.

    I would have probably darkened that bit of light to the 11 o clock of the lamp shade to make it look more like all the light was shining downward, but that's just me.

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