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    1. A gas can floating in the water. (I have the same photo but with ice and water and the gas can from a month later...no one bothered to take it out of the water!!! )

    2. Frosty morning leaves.
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    1. Nice idea and good composition, but rather too under-exposed. I didn't even recognize the floating object as a gas can until you mentioned it.

    2. I like this one; perhaps a slightly greater DoF and slight change of shooting position to reduce background clutter might have made it even stronger?

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    I like shot 1. Not sure if you had access to the gas can but it would have looked even better (compositionally) at the top right where now there is a bit too much empty space.

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