I would be interested in comments on the composition.
Reijo
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I would be interested in comments on the composition.
Reijo
Impressive shot! I like the composition a lot - I guess the things I'd point out would be I'd perhaps like a little more contrast - and he should perhaps stand out from the background a little more, maybe with a background that's a little more blurred (this can be done in post of course).
But great shot, nevertheless - I like a lot...
wow.. i love it. very majestic feel to it with the way you're looking up at the subject.
as for blurring in photoshop, it might be difficult because the fur is so close in color and tone to the background. i dont know if the smart selection tool could pick it up. well, once you have the background selected, you could just do a gaussian blur filter at whatever setting looks good to you.. the tricky part for me is always how to get a good selection.
I like the composition here, it works for me.
Blurring the background (for the future) is best done by simply choosing a large aperture.
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"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
Here's a really quick 5-minute example: (There's a bit of fringing on the edges that needs to be taken care of this way by cloning, but you'll get the idea)
And yes, blurring in camera is the better way...
I would have likely shot this at F-4 and I would have focused on the eyes. The whole dog would not have been in focus, it's true - but the end result would have been IMO, stronger.
This is an important test to do. take a similar shot with a person or the dog against a similar background. Take 1 shot at F2.8 or the largest aperture of you lens. Then take another at a medium aperture for your lens then take 1 more at the smallest aperture.
Examine the shots. You'll SEE the difference by comparing and that's the best way to learn. Hope that helps
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