Thanks for taking a look !
-Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm
-1/5 second @ f/16
-40mm
-ISO 100
-Ev +1 2/3
-jpeg no pp
Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
This is a discussion on Ice World within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Thanks for taking a look ! -Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm -1/5 second @ f/16 -40mm -ISO 100 -Ev +1 2/3 -jpeg ...
Thanks for taking a look !
-Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm
-1/5 second @ f/16
-40mm
-ISO 100
-Ev +1 2/3
-jpeg no pp
Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
"When I slow my walk, open my eyes and listen,
nature reveals her hidden beauty to me." Dwayne Oakes
http://dwayne-oakes.artistwebsites.com/
I really like the colour, texture, and exposure in this image, but the compsition isn't quite doing it for me. I'm afraid that I can't put my finger on it, but something just doesn't 'click' here.
I quite like the texture of the ice here. Perhaps this should have been two images. Zoom in on the "round potato" things on the right and/or zoom in on the icicles on the left.
Thanks everyone for your views on this one ! I appreciate it !
Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
"When I slow my walk, open my eyes and listen,
nature reveals her hidden beauty to me." Dwayne Oakes
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I actually think this is quite well done. I like the patterns.
For me it's about guiding the eye and it's currently not being as well guided as it could be. The bottom right is too bright and I would darken it. Then I would slightly lighten the brown peering through the snow at mid left. That makes that portion the focal point and the image IMO becomes much stronger. Hope that helps,
Marko
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