I'm sorry AT, i must disagree.
The purpose of HDR is normally to get a better range of tones in an image.
In this case, to my eye, you have actually reduced the range of tones and your HDR image looks underexposed.
The original (shot 2) is much better than your HDR. (I also don't think it 'needs' an HDR treatment)
Hope that may help - Marko
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