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    Thanks for taking a look !

    -Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm
    -1 second @ f/22
    -70mm
    -ISO 100
    -EV +1/3
    -jpeg no pp

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    I think I'd crop the left 1/3 of the image off to remove the large, dark area which seems to grab my eye like a magnet. Other than that, it's a nice image; well done.

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    Very nice shot!
    T.I. is correct on the dark patch at left but I think I would also consider dodging (by 30% maybe) instead of cropping.
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    Thanks for your views on this one !

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