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Lighthouse Park (Long exposure day shot)

This is a discussion on Lighthouse Park (Long exposure day shot) within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; How about this one?? Colors were strengthened (VIB+), contrast increased; fill light was used more sparingly this time (1/2 as ...

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kevin99989 Lighthouse Park (Long... 09-20-2011, 12:58 PM
asnow I love the overall soft look... 09-20-2011, 05:59 PM
NorthStone I think this would be a... 10-06-2011, 08:41 AM
Wicked Dark While I like it, I find its... 10-06-2011, 09:49 AM
Marko WD echoes my first instinct... 10-06-2011, 10:04 AM
Mad Aussie I love the sky and water.... 10-06-2011, 06:51 PM
kevin99989 hmmm - interesting. When I... 10-07-2011, 09:01 PM
kevin99989 This came from my original... 10-13-2011, 03:14 AM
Iguanasan I think, for brightness you... 10-13-2011, 07:22 AM
kevin99989 How about this one?? ... 10-13-2011, 04:13 PM
Michaelaw I like this image because I... 10-14-2011, 12:49 AM
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    How about this one??

    Colors were strengthened (VIB+), contrast increased; fill light was used more sparingly this time (1/2 as much as the first photo above)
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    I like this image because I now know where it is and If I'm not mistaken it would make one awesome sunrise shot! I'm finding the overall colour palette distracting, there's a red push that's not going well. the eye pulls to the reds but somehow they don't jive with the ambient colour set. I'd do some work in the yellow and red channels. Saturating the blues a tad with some darkening would help out in the overall depth of the image. Finally, I would get the whites out of their magenta cast and into something more consistent with the time of day (here I'd get close to white) I like the comp but think I would have placed the landmass lower or cropped some of the lower water giving it a more pano feel. I think this image has great potential...I mean one only has to look at time of day and weather condtions to eek out a winner here

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