Hi Anuj,
I don't mind your crop at all.
If this were mine though I would have focused on the water, not the 2 people in near silhouette.
I find their casual gesture is a distraction and the fact that they are sharper than the water spray (the main attraction imo) brings too much attention to them. I would have waited for them to leave actually.
Had their gestures been more interesting, (pensive) it would have made the shot stronger, but here I think they distract because it looks like they are just casually talking about what they had for lunch instead of being impressed by the fab scene in front of them. Just my 2 cents - hope it may help.
best - Marko
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