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This is a discussion on Open Window within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Woudl love some feed back on this one. I'll take the bad and the good...

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    Woudl love some feed back on this one. I'll take the bad and the good
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    My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.

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    Looks like it's been shot through a closed window with all those reflections.

    I've sat and stared at this for a while and looked at the composition and the multitude of distractions created by the reflections, I've looked at the light and the way that was handled (as best I can with those reflections), and, on reflection (pun intended) ... I can't find anything in this I like at all.
    I've seen your work, I know you can take a very good photo, but I'm so sorry, I can see you were trying to be creative here, but this just looks like a mess with little to be positive about.

    Forgive me for being harsh, but at least now you know for sure when I said I liked other photos of yours, I meant it.

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    Hi Ma

    Thanks for taking time to critique. I always appreciate honest feed back
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    My mistake has been seeking new landscapes. I should have been seeking new light.

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    I think with less distractions around the subject it could be more effective. Compositionally it's a little off however rules are meant to be broken at times.

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