Just Dance

[bleaches]

Hey there everybody. I just recently found this forum and for starters ill share some work. Comments are more than welcome

[tirediron]

Nice capture; I like it.

[Travis]

I am unsure of the message in this image.


oh and welcome!!

[Elle]

Very cool shot - I like it


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[Marko]

Hi bleaches and welcome!
Here goes: I'm not sure about this one.
I do like the blue and the foreground especially the shadows, but the background is distracting for me and there is not enough definition in the top part of the silhouette. It's too much pure black for my eye...JMO .


I'm gonna suggest something radical
I think if you cropped the shot around the knees of the subjects and then if you dodged the light between the shoes.... the shot, for me would work better. (and if you'd let me try I'd love to take a crack at it)
Hope that helps,
Marko

[bleaches]

Thanks for the comments guys
heres the original