Steveston Village fish market (Richmond, B.C.)

[kevin99989]

I used a narrow depth of field here - but was it TOO narrow? Focus is on the fish in the center. As always, general comments welcome!!

[Wicked Dark]

No I think it works. If it were wider, and the guy more visible/recognizable, it might look accidental. With it exaggerated like this it seems deliberate. Good colors in it too.

[Mad Aussie]

I agree. I think it's just right!

[thoughton]

Looks right to me too. Of course I am biased, as I took a very similar shot recently at the fish section of the La Boqueria market in Barcelona! I had real problems getting the fish in focus while the fishmonger was in the right place in the background though, you've done a much better job there

I would be tempted to crop a bit off the left edge, and just concentrate on the 4 fish eyes (pun not intended :P) on the right side. It would also move the person to the left third line. Can you tone down the two bright white things on either side of the person?

[asnow]

I agree that the DOF looks right to me. The person in the background is just out of focus enough and the fish in the middle is nicely in focus.

[Iguanasan]

Tim makes some good suggestions. The DOF, I think, is excellent as well, nice choice but some of the other elements keep it from being at that next level. Overall, a very nice shot though.

[Matt K.]

Works for me the way it is. Love the detail on the scales. Only thing I would have done is to get rid of the white spots on the blue background (top left).

[kevin99989]

Thanks for the comments!

Tim - my Nikon D5000 has the ability to pinpoint my focal point in my image. However, it doesn't always lock on properly for some reason, and i get blurry images from time to time, especially when there is a wide range in distance between the foreground and background subjects... Just need to take a few pics at a time, i guess...

[kat]

I think the dof works nicely. My only problem is the highlights (blowout areas). It's very noticeable..and I know you can't help it as you can't move everything but it does catch the eye.

[Marko]

I think the dof works nicely. My only problem is the highlights (blowout areas). It's very noticeable..and I know you can't help it as you can't move everything but it does catch the eye.

My thoughts exactly! Because of those 2 large blown out areas, I personally would not have chosen this composition. My instinct would have been a closeup on the fish or an angle without those bright distractions. (just my 2 cents)