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    Hi everyone,

    This is my first post here.

    My first critique request is for this photo of my wife's plush toy. She really likes this toy. I thought she'd like to have it as a wallpaper. She really did.

    I'd like your comments on both technical and aesthetic aspects. I'm very open to criticism so don't refrain yourselves.

    Technical details: Exif: Nikon d70, 1/8 sec, f/11, iso200. I used an ordinary lamp to light it and a reflector to fill the shadows.

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    Nicely done; good work on the lighting. My only thought is that the shadow under the chin might be a bit deep, but that's fairly minor.

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    I agree - *really* nicely done. Perhaps a little more fill for the chin shadows, or maybe some dodging in post instead.

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    A nice shot for sure - would have been better as a 2 light setup, but still nice. I might burn in the face/nose 5-10%.
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    Thanks for your comments

    tirediron, ben h: I'll try and post one with some dodging.

    marko: Thanks to you and your podcast, I am now more "light" aware but I still have a lot to learn. How would you setup the 2nd light (lower right I guess) and would a 2nd reflector work the same?

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