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    Hmmm, I like it, but the rear falls cut off are a bit distracting. I find it blunts the image. I would have tried to get my top camera angle lined up to the very bottom of the falls, just don't think with falls like that they can be cut, either they are all the way in or all the way out. I do like the textures, the smooth water effect and your B&W tones. Just can't help but be distracted by the cut off falls. Maybe others it won't bother, its just my
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    This is a nice image for sure (with lots of juicy tones to play with) and A.L.raises some good points.

    For me, I find the back falls compete with the foreground rush of water and a larger aperture focused on infinity (the back of the falls) may have helped lead my eye to the falls.

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    Good points and thanks for your comments !

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