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A shallow walk in the park!

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    I have been shooting a lot of landscapes lately f8/f11 stuff so this evening it was all about the shallow depth of field. Went for a walk in my local park, this is the result. Any suggestions, comments, critiques always welcome.

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    i like the variety here as well. Dig the comp in shot one - the dramatic light in shot 2. For shot three I'd pump up the contrast and try some selective sharpening. I dig the comp and selective focus in shot 4 but wish the twig itself was a bit sharper. Hope that helps - marko
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