Clevedon Pier at high tide.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
This is a discussion on High Tide within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Clevedon Pier at high tide. Comments welcome. Taffy...
Clevedon Pier at high tide.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
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Lovely shot. Really like the pastel colouring, and the jet-stream following the line of the pier!
There's a small distraction at the bottom of shot ... a vertical white thing that I'd clone out or remove somehow.
well done and well made.
ditto on the white stick/stem
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And, really, from a technical standpoint that's about all there is to worry about. Another option might be to clone out the ship. Since it's a minimalist type image of the pier then I think the pier should be the only thing in the shot. Other than those nit picky things this is an excellent image.
Thanks for the kind comments.
Iggy - if the ship had been in the B&W I posted I probably would have taken it out, but in this one it feels ok
Cheers
Taffy
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I like this photo it just seems to work all around not much I think I would do differently.
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Love the colours
I would clone out the ship, is distracting.... the pastel color is just great ...
Keep doing...
This is WOW! I love the shot! Beautiful scene! I love the color, very pastel, and the effect of the water waves, plus the effect of the line by the jet, very good to look at! Keep on posting!
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