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Looking towards the Pier

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  1. 05-26-2011, 05:26 PM #1
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    Smile Looking towards the Pier

    Taken at Clevedon, Somerset.

    Tried to create a "simple" landscape

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    Fantastic shot.
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    Good job. I think you've got this one nailed!
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    love the tones and the comp
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    Thanks for looking and your kind comments.

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    I really want to like this photo but it seems a bit stark as the bottom to me appears blown out somewhat and the sky I would like better if there were more definition to the sky. I do like the composition of the photo though.
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    I think this is quite nice but for me i find there is too much space at the bottom.
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    One other small thing that bothers me a bit is the gap between the pier and the berm (not sure the correct term) at the top right. My mind keeps wanting to see the two joined.
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    Quote Originally Posted by asnow View Post
    One other small thing that bothers me a bit is the gap between the pier and the berm (not sure the correct term) at the top right. My mind keeps wanting to see the two joined.
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