A mini exercise... my goal was to find something interesting in a dull photo. Before/after versions are linked... Thanks!
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A mini exercise... my goal was to find something interesting in a dull photo. Before/after versions are linked... Thanks!
Last edited by MartinW; 04-20-2011 at 02:13 PM.
I think you found the more interesting scene lurking at closer to a 70mm focal length within your original 24mm focal length choice. It appears cropping in so much has necessitated some extensive processing which is a shame as now we see an image rather than a photo. Composition wise I like your crop very much.
Thanks Mad Aussie!
I completely agree w/MA here!
The processed composition is considerably stronger than the original imo.
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Thank you for the input Marko
I have read somewhere that a telephoto is usually better for mountain scenes than a uwa... lesson learned!
It's awesome ! Thanks !
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