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    Each time dawn appears, the mystery is there in its entirety. -Rene Daumal

    Here is a couple I shot this morning, any opinions would be appreciated.
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    Broadmeadow Estuary Dawn by okmqaz42, on Flickr
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    Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise by okmqaz42, on Flickr

    Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise by okmqaz42, on Flickr
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    Broadmeadow Estuary Sunrise Swan by okmqaz42, on Flickr


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    Hi the okmqaz42 (interesting handle by the way )

    I love #1- the dark land and the pastel water and sky really work for me. I like the way the shore curves through the bottom and is matched by the jet trails. I also like how the land from the left converges to the land on the right. I think the exposure, sharpness and colour are right on.
    #2. I like the soft feel and the crop on this. but it's not level and that's bugging me. It's tilting down to the right.
    #3. very nice. the swan is a nice touch and the colour is rich. you can get the feel of quietness that must have been there that morning. there's a bit of noise but it's not too bad.
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    Hi Bambi, thanks for the feedback, I have straightened number 2 now, once you pointed it out it was all I could see! Funny story behind the noise on number 3- Camera was set to ISO 2000! i had been taking pictures in a very dark Pub on Friday night and forgot to change it back to something more sensible. The lesson here is always *always* check your settings...
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    Bambi's picked anything I would mentioned ... which is very little on very good photos like these.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    Bambi's picked anything I would mentioned ... which is very little on very good photos like these.
    I feel like you should refer to me as 'grasshopper'
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    Got nothing to add. Bambi has summed it up well.

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    Thanks everyone.
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