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    Smile Deflated Balloon`

    Something different - Caught this at a charity fun run last weekend. They were giving free hot air balloon rides and rather than a standard shot of the airborne balloon I kept shooting as they deflated it and rolled it up.


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    Nice image - what you needed was a young child at the edge of the frame holding a knitting needle and looking guilty!

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    I feel the colors are a bit "boring" (couldn't find a better word), you could try to introduce some curves or play with the levels/exposure to make them more interesting

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    even something as minor as a saturation boost may help the colour issue

    I think the work fante was looking for is "meh"...

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    I think I would have liked to see more of the house and balloon at the same angle.
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