Oh dear, I'm going to agree with Tegan?Well, the first thing to remember about any image is: If you like it, that's what counts. I'm just going to add my thought on a couple of points. First, I don't see the blur adding anything. I understand why you did it, but my first thought on looking at the image was, "HDR misalignment?"
These images are indeed somewhat cliche in the contest and commercial worlds, BUT they're nice images nonetheless. I think the reason is that like sunsets, they're an occasion when almost anyone can take a really scenic picture, and hence they're everywhere.
From a technical standpoint the image is good, however the sky is week. A circular polarizer might have really helped to pop the contrast between the sky and clouds and enhanced the overall effect of the image. The use of the road/path to take the eye through the image is very good, but I'm reminded of your "Fire in the Sky" image in that a change in camera position might well have improved the image, again, perhaps down low.
What I'll suggest if I may is that for the next few days, each time you take a picture, take it the way it first occurs to you, and then reshoot the scene from different positions, that is, with you and the camera in different positions, down low, off to the side, up above, etc. After you've done a few of those, compare the results and see if you don't find that the ones taken from different perspectives are just a little more interesting.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
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