Not sure if this works, comments welcome. Taken at sunrise.
Cheers
taffy
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Not sure if this works, comments welcome. Taken at sunrise.
Cheers
taffy
Wow, works for me. Very pretty.
Things that jump out at me - the horizon/shore line could do with some straightening, as the pic is at an angle.
I might try experiment with cropping to get the shore away from the dead midpoint of the picture, but to be honest I'm not much of a cropper, and you do have a nice symmetry there between the clouds and reflections.
I'd probably also sharpen it up, and maybe try and bump the colours up some more.
But - beautiful image, though, regardless.
This is quite beautiful!
- Now I'm at the real nitty gritty for ya. A teeny-touch centered for me. I wish the central clouds were off a bit more to the right.
- Something bugs me about the tones of the structures in the background.
- To me those structures are the focal point. There's a bright bush {center left} that's trying to capture my eye. I'd darken it a tad.
Hope that helps,
Marko
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Love the lighting effect!
Detail, colour and lighting are very well handled and contribute to the visual impact. The sharpness problem may be due to a less than perfect HDR allignment by the program used or perhaps the compression.
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WOW! Awesome Capture!
Thanks for the comments.
The sharpness is down to the compression when converting to JPEG I think.
Marko - looking at it now, I think it was the central position of the clouds that made me question whether it worked.
cheers
taffy
I like the overall feel of the image. The warm tones in the background convey a positive feeling.
On the sharpness side of things, you are right that the jpeg compression algorithm can do this especially if limited to a low number of pixels.
Since I am not sure what tools you use for HDR or if this was processed as an HDR I can't comment much. But if you are are fan of the effect that Tone Mapping gives you on a high dynamic range image, then you might wish to poke around with the shadow-highlight adjustment filter in Photoshop. The added advantage is that you can make this none-destructive and isolate it to only certain areas of you image - all without out having to down-shift to 8-bits.
Excellent job overall, Taffy.
Regards,
MikeV
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