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  1. 01-11-2011, 02:48 PM #1
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    I think it looks fine. A little soft around the text perhaps.
    Possibly could have that ribbon in a nicer arrangement rather than dominantly leaving the photo at right of frame.
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    I agree with MA here - The Trident text on the spool facing us should be tack sharp and it's a bit soft.
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