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    Are you going to add a photo to the post so we can see?
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    I see one, A.L. Not sure why you don't. I'll offer up my critique....

    Most of their limbs are cut off including a head and the centre of the photo is way overblown to the point you cannot tell who is the artist. The gear on the right also seems to be very distracting. I think I see what you like about it but honestly if it were mine I would delete it.
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    ahhhh i can see what you mean but what if you Do know who the artist is, would it make a difference? for example if you can Clearly see the signature pose of an artist.. err for example Micheal Jackson. Would it make a difference because you know who the artist is by seeing the signature pose that everyone knows?

    and dont worry about it if i put it up in the critiques department i would not be offended no matter what. and not to mention its my first concert in my life which means my first concert shooting EVER lol i was prepared for any comments

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    I have to agree with Iggy. You could try bumping up the contrast quite a bit to get some more dramatic black and whites- right now it's all gray but that won't fit the missing limbs. I think as a learning experience it was a good one but the photo itself is not a keeper. you will know that too as you take more pictures. I have found that I am much more rigid in which photos get to stay and which are deleted.
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    thanks for the comments
    am i supposed to delete the post itself tho?

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    absolutely not! you can leave the post. Please don't think that we don't welcome the post. I have put a few pictures here myself and recieved some honest criticisms. The idea is to take the info and grow with it. I hope you keep posting
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