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    nice lighting on this one. I like the pose and the attitude in her face. The eye seems a bit soft and it's a bit too focused on the breasts for my tastes- but others may differ on that opinion .
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    The light on the right side of her face seems a little strong to me and the focus is off by just a couple of inches I think as Bambi said. The expression and mood are wonderful.
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    As much as I like breasts ... I do think they steal a tad too much attention here when the boxing gloves are almost lost. I think at least one of those gloves should have been highlighted a bit more.

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    I love the lighting on the gloves here. The lighting on the face is quite hard but it's interesting and does add a dramatic mood. I do agree it's a bit bright though. I also agree that i like breasts. LOL...I mean I also agree that there's too much light on them.
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    I agree with the above posts and think it would be good to see more focus around the face and little more light on the gloves....Pack a Punch...Nice One

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    What breasts? All I see is the somewhat blown out sweat ... I think there is where the light fails ... and yes, there is too much light on the person's right eye ... makes her look almost like one of those Zombies .... but her facial expression fits the title ...
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