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This is a discussion on First Critique Post within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Originally Posted by tirediron Who you talkin' 'bout??? Woops - I meant Mindforge (MF) my bad....

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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    Who you talkin' 'bout???

    TI=Tired Iron. even a dense gal like me can figure that out

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    Quote Originally Posted by tomorrowstreasures View Post

    TI=Tired Iron. even a dense gal like me can figure that out
    lol..... maybe not...
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    Posing could be improved. The hand closest to the camera generally looks larger which means that with clasped hands you overlap the nearest hand with the farthest hand. A diagonal angle makes the person look slimmer and that applies to the face as well. Female heads should be tilted more than male heads and male heads are generally tilted toward the low shoulder and not the high shoulder.

    There should be some degree of detail even in the shadow areas of a portrait or it has not been properly lit. Eyes of course should be the most prominent and visually effective part of a portrait.

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    Thanks, again. When I get my light back, I'll reshoot and try a lower seat, and a 45 degree angle, and more reflectors to fill in the shadow side a bit, and more seperation from the backdrop.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Travis View Post
    lol..... maybe not...
    LOL - yeah, I know that, but I hadn't posted in this thread at that point. Of course someone did make a post which sounded an awful lot like something I would say; wonder if mebbe someone was just assuming?

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