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Please gimme your thought on how to maximize this beauty

This is a discussion on Please gimme your thought on how to maximize this beauty within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; You have truely opened up my mind Tegan and Mindforge. I now understand better what Photoshop and advanced techniques could ...

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    Spriter is offline Member
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    You have truely opened up my mind Tegan and Mindforge. I now understand better what Photoshop and advanced techniques could bring to me.

    Helped by the various comments, here is what I did with my limited ability.

    Yes, there is still an area out of focus in the foreground. and some bright spot in the lower left part. However, I like the way my eyes follow the curves of petals to reach the carpels and stamen.

    I have the impression that she (the flower) is offering herself to me.

    Thanks a millions for all your comments. Truly appreciated your great input.

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    much more interesting, one thing on the crop though. You might try and get the whole flower in it. I wouldn't cut the edges of it off... then again, you might have said this looks better after looking at it that way, so maybe I am wrong.

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