Comment! Taken from inside Time Warner Atrium, third level. Kind of wish they cleaned their glass a bit more in the top left. Not sure if I can fix that PP
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Comment! Taken from inside Time Warner Atrium, third level. Kind of wish they cleaned their glass a bit more in the top left. Not sure if I can fix that PP
This is a very interesting image of a cool looking area. I love the wall of glass and those revolving doors look cool. The shutter speed, however, was a poor choice as there are quite a few blurry objects. Had all of them been blurry that might be something but with some blurry and some not the blurry subjects just seem distracting to me though in some ways it tells the story of how busy the place is.
I also think it would have been a more interesting shot had you moved to your left a fair bit and lined everything up so it was balanced. Having everything at a slight angle here is not pleasing to me.
I hope that helps. Maybe others will have more ideas.
It certainly looks like a wonderful place to take a camera as there looks like there's a lot of things to shoot.
Thanks for your comments. The center of the balcony was a bit of an access issue, but will try, along with different shutter speeds! The shot is a bit more casual taken off axis, but also gave me the movement of the traffic cars top left.
this shot definitely gives you a sense that it is a hub of activity, a wider angle lens would possibly add to the composition
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