This Tenby Harbour in West Wales taken late evening.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
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This Tenby Harbour in West Wales taken late evening.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
Quite nice Taffy. I'll have to be picky to critique this one.
Aspect ratio suggests a cropped sky again ... I'd have liked to see that left in and give those buildings a bit more room to breathe.
Lights on, suggesting dusk or early evening but few shadows to help illustrate that. A little on the foreground rock but not really enough I think.
I think for me, I'd like to see this scene a little darker overall to give that sky a more night feel and make the lights and buildings stand out more in contrast.
Nice use of the rock as foreground interest and overall a pleasant scene.
I agree with MA (of course why would I argue? ). I quite like that rock in the middle- it looks like a crocodile.The colours of the houses are neat as well.
I would love to see some closer shots of the boats too.
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Taken on board the comments and ended up with this one.
Not sure if this meets the spec?
Feedback welcome
Taffy
NOW it looks like a real early evening shot to me. In my opinion .... much better!
Would agree the re-work of the second image brings more of the ''feel'' of the time of day. The crop is a little tight for me especially at the top but it's still a keeper...
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I find this a bit busy, many things distract from the subject of the image, which I have yet to figure out.
I tend to follow by a rule - Simplicity is best.
But keep in mind rules are ment to be broken ^_-
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